You're very good at imagery. Your descriptions are very precise, evocative, and efficient.

My favorite line was:

“Who, else.” she said, finally putting out the cigarette, never having ashed it once. She lived her whole life like that.

because it was brilliant how you illustrated her attitude towards life with a casual, physical mannerism.

Congratulations on a short fiction, beautifully written, and I look forward to reading your future work.

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